She sort of looks evil- is that the direction you were going?

Nice, I like the tone and comp.

Some shots just make you stop and take a look!!! Love it.

i love the angle that the picture is taken. she looks really good and most girls just dont do well at that angle. good job!!!!

the lighting is beautiful.

I love your work as well. The composition in this one is intense. I need to shoot more model pics, I have never worked with professional models, just kids having fun.