This is a great improvement! Even though the father drops out of focus, his expression is definitely there. Now concentrate on cropping out dead space. Nothing on the right adds to the picture! Also, move around , in this case to the left so that the child fills the right side of the image. Sometimes you can't always do that, that is when you have to crop to balance out a picture. Also, if you have one good pic, don't upload a similar one if that one is not as good!

Thanks I wanted the father out of focus to make the baby stand out. I will crop this more and see how it looks thats for the advice.